Wow! This music is deep! I really like the melody. I play the guitar and always wanted to implement banjo and mandolin type of sound into my playing, so this gave me some ideas. Oh, Sorry this comment has nothing to do with the poem which I believe is very wonderful and beautiful. I think it is the journey rather than some succeeding or some failing isn't the point, your right life itself is a lesson and we learn from our experiences. Such a wonderful and thoughtful poem and this song matches the poem so well. It was like this song was meant for this peom truly.